Submission (#263) Approved
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Prompt
Submitted
1 November 2021, 03:30:09 EDT (3 years ago)
Processed
13 November 2021, 11:00:59 EST (3 years ago) by PaperTsubaki
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"Hi Bryce!" Elle started, her mind racing. She impulsively wanted to yell YES at him, but she instead paused, dug around in her pocket and found a pen, and scribbled down the details from the flyer onto her left forearm. She'd been wearing a shorter glove today, as she was trying to become more confident in her scars, as though she'd been repeatedly told that no one would be weird or rude about them, there was a little tiny voice that would tell her otherwise.
"I'd love to come!!" Elle finally answered, double checking she could read the scribbled notes on her arm. Though it wasn't the best habit she'd gotten into, she forgot things so often writing it down usually helped her remember it! (except for the times she accidentally smudged or rubbed off the writing.. but that wasn't happening today!).
Elle's tail wagged behind her as she excitedly waited for Bryce to reply.
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I hope this is ok! I couldn't tell if the getting the wristband from Bryce would then lead immediately into Chaimi-Con or if it would be a 'Here's your wristband, come back at [date] when the con starts!'
if it is the first option, here's a quick rewrite so it makes more sense :'>
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"Hi Bryce!" Elle started, her mind racing with excitement. She impulsively wanted to yell YES at him, but refrained as yelling at people she didn't know sometimes weirded people out, which made sense, so Elle made sure to not yell as she didn't want to make him uncomfortable. She impulsively tugged at her glove, it notably being shorter than usual, as she was trying to become more confident in her scars, as though she'd been repeatedly told that no one would be weird or rude about them, there was a little tiny voice that would tell her otherwise.
"I'd love to come!!" Elle finally answered, her tail wagging excitedly behind her, her eyes bright and animated.
"I'd love to come!!" Elle finally answered, double checking she could read the scribbled notes on her arm. Though it wasn't the best habit she'd gotten into, she forgot things so often writing it down usually helped her remember it! (except for the times she accidentally smudged or rubbed off the writing.. but that wasn't happening today!).
Elle's tail wagged behind her as she excitedly waited for Bryce to reply.
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I hope this is ok! I couldn't tell if the getting the wristband from Bryce would then lead immediately into Chaimi-Con or if it would be a 'Here's your wristband, come back at [date] when the con starts!'
if it is the first option, here's a quick rewrite so it makes more sense :'>
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"Hi Bryce!" Elle started, her mind racing with excitement. She impulsively wanted to yell YES at him, but refrained as yelling at people she didn't know sometimes weirded people out, which made sense, so Elle made sure to not yell as she didn't want to make him uncomfortable. She impulsively tugged at her glove, it notably being shorter than usual, as she was trying to become more confident in her scars, as though she'd been repeatedly told that no one would be weird or rude about them, there was a little tiny voice that would tell her otherwise.
"I'd love to come!!" Elle finally answered, her tail wagging excitedly behind her, her eyes bright and animated.
Rewards
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Chaimi-Con 2021 Wristband | 1 |
Characters
Afternoons: Elle
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Add-Ons
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Lati-Waffles's Bank
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